Sarah Flanigan - Poetry Simply Put

Feb 09 2007

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Sharks

Posted at 9:01 pm under Creative Writing, Life, alert, dasterly deeds, dirtbags, haiku, heads up, original fiction, pay attention, perspective, reality, time in a bottle, war, watch out, writing

Sharks lurk openly
Grin in false camraderie
Their teeth in your back.

6 responses so far

6 Responses to “Sharks”

dragonlifeon 09 Feb 2007 at 11:53 pm 1

You could apply that great piece as an epytaph for an hostile take over bid!

indeed you could. are you in the midst of one of those awful things?
sarah
Evanon 10 Feb 2007 at 4:45 am 2

You mjust be channeling Australia at this moment, we are having a bit of an invasion of sharkies! Not the best thing for an Aussie to see in the middle of summer swimming season!

some of my best friends are aussies, evan - and i’d hate to see any of them eaten by the sharkies. how bad is it?
sarah
krkbakeron 10 Feb 2007 at 5:42 am 3

Oooh! I really like this one. I think it’s my favorite so far, the pic is great too.

i have a soft spot for this one as well. yes, the little toon is funny isn’t it?
sarah
michaelmon 10 Feb 2007 at 9:23 am 4

Interesting.
I have my thoughts on this one but that will be saved for a future discussion.
Great pic…
How about a skuzzy lawyer haiku? ~m

i look forward to the future discussion. but i must say, wouldn’t this suffice for a skuzzy lawyer haiku? alright, I’ll do one just for you. later today.
sarah
spasmicallyperfecton 10 Feb 2007 at 11:39 am 5

You could almost put any ‘backstabbing’ title for this one…… like it….

you’re right, you could. glad you liked it. sarah
debambamon 12 Feb 2007 at 1:17 am 6

You know I’ve read this three times now and each time it makes me think of something else!
Good stuff Sarah.
Kelly

thank you , kel. you should try your hand at it. you could do zoe haiku. think about it. i already have three racing around in my head just from the mere thought of it.
sarah