Mar 31 2007
I Haiku, Do You Haiku?
In the spirit of the love I feel for each of you, I have written haikus for those of you whom I’ve missed previously. Hope you like them. They were written with love.
Sarah
Spaz:
nature girl delights
to see wild mama bird nest
on her patio
Evyl:
big handsome brute like
nobody you have ever
met in any life
Michael:
soft soul with good heart
defying the injustice
that life gave to them
Jennifer:
loving mother light
shines in her children’s sweet eyes
and makes the world good.
Lolly:
lovely red rose she
opens to the sun of life
and tickles our minds
Maureen:
kick ass mother earth
gives sage advice selflessly
and the laughs are free
Alison:
disappeared from view
her words haunt and linger still
come back to us please
Natural:
where’s the energy
pulsating and delightful
that we crave alone
Mark:
haiku master he
that gentle taps my mind’s edge
and takes no credit.
Kelly:
coffee fiend and friend
fiery passionate girl
so glad I know you.
copyright 2007
12 responses so far
These are all very good. I really like the pic you put with these. Kim
thanks kim and happy sunday to you.
sarah
Awwww.
That’s so nice of you.
First haiku ever written for me, I believe.
Thank you, Sarah…
~m
any time, my friend.
sarah
Thank you so much Sarah!
Big hug your way.
You mind me posting it in your name underneath the bird post?
It just fits so nicely.
Love it.
Thanks for the heartwarming smile.
of course i don’t mind if you post it under the bird post - go for it. i’m glad it gave you a smile.
sarah
ps: hugs back
I particularly like Kelly’s — the coffee fiend and friend…so often they go together
I missed you. Sarah…thank you for keeping the light on. Alison
i miss you too my dear - and your wonderful poetry. i shall always keep the light on - no worries.
love,
sarah
Masters of war
Ought to be reminded
The Minstrel’s words
Cheers,
Robert-Gilles
lol - are we having a haiku-off? dueling keyboards?
bonjour!
sarah
Oh what a wonderful welcome back to the web Sarah! Thanks so much…it is so greatly appreciated.
Kelly
well we didn’t want you to think we’d forgotten about you or weren’t waiting with baited breath for your return. what is baited breath anyway?
sarah
Thank you - you are kind.
Haiku master me be not
yet; must post more soon!
(smile) yes, you must post more soon.
sarah
It just flew into my head, being reminded of Bob Dylan and my own hate of war, having seen it with my own eyes!
A bientot!
Robert-Gilles
bob dylan is a master of words - very much so.
bonjour!
sarah
How cool! And sweet. First Haiku ever written about me, too, I’m sure. Thank you.
happy to do it and you’re welcome.
sarah
No, I don’t. But since you won’t stop bugging me (
):
Creative Sarah,
a gem within living earth
reflecting sunshine.
(I think this is how it’s supposed to be done, let me know, Master.)
you dont, what? oh no, i think my short term memory is failing me again.
what a wonderful haiku, i’m touched spaz, i really am. thank you darling girl.
i’m not a master but i’d say you most definitely have the haiku gene. lovely.
sarah
That’s very very sweet of you. I know I always treasure my one. Someone yesterday at work asked me what a haiku was and I just burst out smiling and read them mine.
aw evan, i’m touched that you treasure yours and even share it with others. i never would have thought. so then you have a wee piece of me to have for all eternity then.
sarah
You are too sweet. I am blushing like a little schoolgirl. Well, to be honest, I am not really blushing but strangely I do feel like a little schoolgirl.
well dear, i’m glad i could make you feel young again.
sarah