Sarah Flanigan - Poetry Simply Put

Aug 19 2007

sarah flanigan

Sweat

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1. purefnevylon 20 Aug 2007 at 8:08 pm 1

   Good Plan.

   i thought so. sarah

2. ~mon 20 Aug 2007 at 8:16 pm 2

   Contact the High School Musical II staff immediately regarding some decent lyrics.
   Nice
   ~m

   oh how i am laughing at this one. sarah

3. ~mon 20 Aug 2007 at 8:17 pm 3

   *meaning yours blow theirs away :0)
   ~m

   thank you, kindly. though i’m sure they’d beg to differ.
   sarah

4. dragonlifeon 21 Aug 2007 at 3:43 am 4

   I’ve just sent this “haiku” to a blog called beerhaikudaily.com:
   35 degrees in the shade
   7 degrees in my glass
   atime to cool down

   It’s bleeding hot here in Shizuoka! Mind you I shall have some time away as I go home in Brgundy for a few days. Plenty of wine and cool! LOL
   Make sure you get enough fluids!
   Tata,
   Robert-Gilles

   P.S: the berets? the Basques, maybe. The French Transalpine special Army, definitely!

   bon jour!
   have a wonderful holiday - and get some cool wine at a lovely cafe.
   sarah

5. ozymandiazon 21 Aug 2007 at 11:19 am 5

   this all seems very familiar
   oh yea
   I live in Florida is why…

   poor man. i lived in florida for a very short time. i didn’t like it at all.
   sarah

6. murderofravenson 21 Aug 2007 at 8:17 pm 6

   Interesting rhythm. Almost has a “rap” feel to it. Which in this case I mean as a compliment.

   -smith

   it sort of sounded that way in my head too. not sure how oppressive heat turns into a rap in your head but it’s best not to question these things. sarah

7. alisonon 21 Aug 2007 at 10:06 pm 7

   I agree with Smith! This could be perfect for slam poetry…remember talking about that? Yay!! Great one, Sarah.

   hi ali,
   don’t you think it would be too short for that? it’s sort of a new thing for me, i’m playing with it right now. glad you liked it.
   sarah

8. tomachfiveon 22 Aug 2007 at 4:26 am 8

   Oh, the nonchalance, the cool attitude, and the sensual image, I like.

   hi tom!
   i like that you like. sarah

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