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Aug 22 2007
sarah flanigan
Posted at 12:01 pm under Creative Writing, Future, Poetry, ghosts, haiku, my heart, original fiction
Our time is tender hurling t’ward infinity photographs we leave
copyright 2007
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It’s nice to see haiku’s done well.
and so nice to do them well. thank you - means something from the haiku king. sarah
that last line could also read ‘memories we leave’ nice one Sarah… cheers, Kelly
i suppose so - although a photograph is sort of like a frozen memory, isn’t it?
sarah
nice rendition of corporeal existance
thank you. nice choice of words. sarah
no, I liked photograph (the use of the word that is) the frozen moment, yes… very good.
yes, i did too. and exactly what i meant - the frozen moment - i think memories are too fluid for the meaning i was going for. thanks. sarah
very thanks magic story
you’re welcome. thank you for reading. sarah
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It’s nice to see haiku’s done well.
and so nice to do them well. thank you - means something from the haiku king.
sarah
that last line could also read ‘memories we leave’
nice one Sarah…
cheers, Kelly
i suppose so - although a photograph is sort of like a frozen memory, isn’t it?
sarah
nice rendition of corporeal existance
thank you. nice choice of words.
sarah
no, I liked photograph (the use of the word that is)
the frozen moment, yes…
very good.
yes, i did too. and exactly what i meant - the frozen moment - i think memories are too fluid for the meaning i was going for. thanks.
sarah
very thanks magic story
you’re welcome. thank you for reading.
sarah