Oct 08 2007

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sarah flanigan

Hourglass

If time were
something I
could hold onto
something I
could grasp tightly
something I
could own outright
something I
could control
something I
could understand
something I
could love truly
It wouldn’t be
so scary
to watch it
pass me by

copyright 2007

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  1. 1poet4manon 08 Oct 2007 at 9:09 pm 1

    Hello

    First time reader - first time responder…wait, let me turn my radio down…thats better, now you will be able to understand me when I say, nice poem…

    Poetman

    hello poetman,
    thank you for reading - and liking the poem. hope you’ll come back again. :) sarah

  2. tomachfiveon 10 Oct 2007 at 1:47 pm 2

    A great read, we should make friends with time then.

    hi tom,
    how are you? perhaps making friends with it, would be a good idea. how would one go about it?
    sarah

  3. Lollyon 11 Oct 2007 at 2:47 pm 3

    Creative picture!

    it is a wonderful picture isn’t it?
    sarah

  4. krkbakeron 16 Oct 2007 at 9:30 am 4

    YES!!
    I absolutely loved this.
    And… I relate to it well.

    Been missing you. Sorry I’ve been scarce.
    kim

    oh thanks sweetie. been missing you too but i’ve barely paid attention to my poor neglected blog lately - hot on my new project. let’s try to stay in touch though.
    love
    sarah

  5. ozymandiazon 22 Oct 2007 at 10:29 am 5

    I really like the poem
    just one thing though
    Time
    my dear
    soes not pass you by
    it swaddles you
    it holds you to its bossom
    it protects you
    from experiencing everything in this life all at once
    it provides tho opportunity
    to live
    each
    moment

    ozy,
    time swaddles you but passes me by. figures. ;) sarah

  6. purefnevylon 25 Oct 2007 at 7:03 pm 6

    Great poem and I love the pic.

    thanks, darlin’
    the pic was a great find.
    sarah

  7. purefnevylon 29 Oct 2007 at 5:57 pm 7

    Been awhile Sarah. Saving up for a Halloween spectacular?

    i know, darlin’
    i’m afraid i’m working on a new book and it’s taken a lot of my free time. i feel badly that i’ve neglected my little reading room so much, but i keep vowing to get back on it. i will and soon. thanks for caring.
    (((hugs)))
    sarah

  8. Soullesson 30 Oct 2007 at 1:58 am 8

    To have the option to stop time and yet choose instead to let it pass by would truly be a marvelous gift, even in the dream world. ^_^

    The photo is incredibly stunning, by the way.

    Cheers.

    yes, it would be an incredible gift. i love the photo too. thanks for reading.
    sarah :)

  9. spasmicallyperfecton 31 Oct 2007 at 8:47 am 9

    Hey, I miss my poet friend. At least she’s doing something else creative, my poor time seems to flow through my hands like wind through my hair.

    I need some inspiration…. but more than that I need to make some time to catch up with myself.

    This morning I sat on my 1 hour train ride with a blank page infront of me. Managed to write a few lines in the last 5 minutes, nothing exciting. What a sad moment.

    Oh well, I know I am off balance. I have 3 days off this weekend and I need it.

    Hope all is well and congrats on your new book start. Would love to take a peek.

    S.

    i miss me too. ;) i keep vowing to get down to business and be here more but the muse calls. i’d be happy to send you a peek - just email me.

    don’t disparage you few lines from this morning. sometimes, getting it down means more than what ends up on the page. i understand feeling off balance - it must be a change phase for you - i think i am going through one too. but you are so centered as a person, you will weather it well. of this i am sure.

    and i will try to be better about posting more and visiting. i just need to get more organized. ;) love
    sarah

  10. murderofravenson 05 Nov 2007 at 10:54 pm 10

    It wouldn’t be
    so scary
    to watch it
    pass me by

    Damn, is it ever scary! The Buddhists tell us that we can derive comfort from the knowledge that nothing lasts forever. Sadly, I’ve never quite been able to make that one work for me.

    -smith

    it’s funny because i don’t believe that nothing lasts forever. perhaps on a physical plane that’s true - but it seems the physical is such a small part of what we are really. but i would say that things do always change, though, don’t they?
    sarah

  11. tomachfiveon 11 Nov 2007 at 5:44 am 11

    Hi Sarah,

    Took me time to come back, but you forgive me, will you?

    I guess accepting time as a constant in our lives will be the first step in making friends.

    We’d stick with time with the good times.

    We’d stick with time in the bad times.

    We’d finally part with time in no time.

    There’s always a goodbye, in even in the staunchest of friendships.

    Love the way you make me think.

    hi tom,
    i’m always glad to see you whenever you have time to drop by. i’m glad i make you think because that makes me think too.
    sarah

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