May 21 2008

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sarah flanigan

Waiting

Posted at 1:24 pm under Poetry, original fiction, time in a bottle, writing

(for my friend. sarah)

sleep doesn’t come
dreams are villians
that cut deep
with all the fears
that slumber until
roused from darkness

time does not move
a standing sentry
poising over expectations
that will not be recognized

prayers are not answered
angels swirl between the pleas
candles beckon & flicker in supplication
the alms are not enough

hope wears a black shroud
hiding in the shadows
afraid to be itself
leery of disappointing

life twitters on about you
but does not include your presence
in its endless dance
taunting you with sparks of other lives.

copyright 2008

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  1. writerchickon 22 May 2008 at 7:33 am 1

    Thanks, Sarah. This means a lot.
    Annie

    i was happy to do it.
    sarah

  2. Redon 23 May 2008 at 7:22 am 2

    *sniff* I know this feeling all too well, and it saddens me even more to know that our friend, Annie, is going through it as well.
    Happy thoughts and prayers continue to flow.

    thank you, red for your sweet words. yes, the prayers continue.
    sarah

  3. Alion 25 May 2008 at 6:13 pm 3

    I clicked rosary beads for Annie and her friend. This was thoughtful of you,S. Ali

    please keep the clicking going - it seems to be working.
    love
    sarah

  4. ozymandiazon 27 May 2008 at 10:31 am 4

    hope wears a black shroud
    hiding in the shadows
    afraid to be itself
    leery of disappointing

    beautiful
    here is to ripping away that shroud and bringing hope into the light.

    yes, i agree - here’s to ripping away the shroud. thanks, as always, for reading.
    sarah

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