Jul 31 2008
word play
word play
you say
i say
the words
race my
spine
invade my
dark soft
places
shatter
composure
that was
a lie
the curtain
opens
to reveal
what you
want
to see
to be
to own
word play
you say
i say
whispers
frantic
immediate
wet
and sweet
singular
in their
passion
exclusive
in their
utterance
word play
you say
i say
copyright 2008
3 responses so far
ahh .. this was mahh-velous.
i love word play.
yes, my wild friend, i know that you do. and i know how much this spoke to you.
sarah
This was quite sensual.
i appreciate the short lines- like impatience.
your analysis is quite brilliant c, impatience was my theme. thank you for such seeing eyes.
sarah
Wow! absolutely took my breath away
well then, i suppose the poem did its job.
thank you, wayne for reading.
sarah