Aug 02 2008

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sarah flanigan

Rage

Posted at 12:03 pm under Poetry, original fiction

Rage.
Pure
rage.
It kicked
at the back
of my head
like a purple explosion
of venom
and i drank down
another cigarette
and inhaled a tumbler
of coffee
then took a hammer to
my splitting head
But there was
a flower
on my table that is
so beautiful
I wanted to
look at it and
breathe her
in
Except the clothes
of another
have been hung
on me
and they suffocate
anihilate
confiscate
Me
I would rather
be naked
and seen in
all my chubby
embarrassment
and truth.

Copyright 2008

2 responses so far

2 Responses to “Rage”

  1. Pure Evylon 02 Aug 2008 at 6:34 pm 1

    And I would prefer seeing you that way as well. ;)
    oh my god, evyl i laughed and then started to blush.

    sarah :oops:

  2. Murder of Ravenson 07 Aug 2008 at 11:44 pm 2

    Ah, now this was good.

    “It kicked
    at the back
    of my head
    like a purple explosion
    of venom
    and i drank down
    another cigarette”

    This works really well. I liked that line a lot.

    -smith

    lol smith, i think i was channeling bob dylan or something with this one. thanks.
    sarah

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