Sep 10 2008
If I Were…
To write you a poem
I would write it
in a cerulean sky
I would send it
from the shadowed moon
I would hide it
among scattered stars
Shelter it in
sea-green eyes
And it would
spiral
toward the Sun
broadcast
as fractured
Light
and prism
in your
Dreams
copyright 2008
7 responses so far
really really beautiful
why thank you, ozy. thank you very much.
sarah
From If I Were…, 2008/09/12 at 12:22 PM
a cerulean sky
sea-green eyes
Simply smashing. I am dizzy from drinking in this piece.
~wayne
thank you, wayne - i do love the blues and greens.
sarah
From If I Were…, 2008/09/11 at 11:27 PM
Shooting love. So uplifting. So there.
I wish I could write poems like this. I wonder if I could,I don’t even know what cerulean means .
Loving this poem
Love & Light
Di
hi di,
i’m sure you could write any type of poem you wanted to write. cerulean is a most beautiful shade of blue. check google images for it. gorgeous.
sarah
From If I Were…, 2008/09/11 at 3:29 PM
Very nice and the photo as well!
than you very much and for reading.
sarah
From If I Were…, 2008/09/11 at 7:46 AM
lovely.
pure.
love the idea of this piece, sarah.
well hello, red! good to see you. i rather liked the idea of this poem myself. thank you.
sarah
From If I Were…, 2008/09/10 at 8:37 PM
Wow.
Where did that all come from?
Shooting through the universe like a burning comet.
Beautiful.
Mystical.
Playful.
Me loves it.
Plain and simple.
hi spaz,
well the inspiration came quickly, i’ll admit - perhaps that was the whooshing sound you heard, rather than a comet? thank you, dear for the nice adjectives.
sarah
From If I Were…, 2008/09/10 at 2:35 PM
Delightful poem, Sarah.
Concise, but filled with meaning (feeling) - Exactly what a poem should be. I am a sky lover, and hunger for words/music about that love. You will find some cerulean in my web gallery.
hello harvey,
i did indeed find some cerulean in your web gallery. very nice.
sarah