Sep 15 2008

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sarah flanigan

dancing pen

Posted at 12:35 am under Humor, Inspiration, Poetry, Writer's Block, can't think, writing

stab, skip, flow,
do your job
suck the words from my
brain

make it work
take the junk piled in the
back of my mind
become something
anything

is it the music? what would you
like? jazz, blues, reggae, metal???
dance little pen of
mine
make me look good
make me look smart

there must be something
utterly profound about orange
metallic nail polish
never mind the beads
of sweat, they smear
the ink so nicely give them the words
(which you are in short supply of my friend) that nice
little flourish.

dance damn you!
Dance!

copyright 2008

5 responses so far

5 Responses to “dancing pen”

  1. ozymandiazon 15 Sep 2008 at 4:04 am 1

    love the new digs
    and a very funny poem to boot
    I seem to recall giving orders similar to that
    “dance, damn you, dance”

    hi ozy!
    hmm, now that you mention it, i may have seen that poem of yours. oh my, i hope i didn’t channel it without realizing it. :)
    sarah

  2. Dion 16 Sep 2008 at 12:25 am 2

    HI Sarah.

    Lets see if your new home lets me make a comment today, I have tried previously.

    Love this poem, felt it all the way through it. Damn you pen dance awww!!

    Lovely stuff, thank you. Pens sometimes like to smooche. Hope it lets me submit this.

    Love
    Di

    hi di!
    sorry about the comment problem, i can’t figure out it wouldn’t let you comment. but it looks like everthing is fine now. if you have a problem again, just email me and i’ll see what the problem is, okay?
    love
    sarah

    ps: i had a problem commenting on your blog too the other day - maybe the comment gods we’re feeling bad that day? ;)

  3. Dion 16 Sep 2008 at 12:26 am 3

    YAY !! It did. I tried to comment so much on A-Mused. I loved it.

    Have a lovely day
    Love
    Di

    oh i’m glad you liked a-mused - it gave me a chuckle too. you have a lovely day too, dear.
    sarah

  4. Robert-Gilles Martineau (ロベル)on 16 Sep 2008 at 4:45 am 4

    Hi dee!
    Have updated my bookmark!
    Take good care of yourself!
    Robert-Gilles

    hello robaire!
    thank you - you take care of yourself as well.
    sarah

  5. Redon 17 Sep 2008 at 12:25 pm 5

    Awesome.
    Make that pen booogie!

    hi red,
    yes, we must make the pen boogie indeed.
    sarah

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