Sep 17 2008

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sarah flanigan

Inevitable

Inevitable
moths drawn to flame
in endless circling dance
fluttering wings
sharing breath
exchanging color
and flow

Inevitable
sun to moon
one chasing the other
across the sky
stars standing in between
dark swallowing
light
meteor storms and
rainbows exhale

Inevitable
passion and heat
bleary eyed, wet embrace
consume and extinguish
the dance of
bodies in raptured motion
the breath of desire
whispered and bitten
on the edge of the
earth
which shatters and
ceases

Inevitable
yes
inevitable

copyright 2008

6 responses so far

6 Responses to “Inevitable”

  1. anjaon 18 Sep 2008 at 2:51 pm 1

    This is a beautiful site.

    thank you, very much. i hope you’ll come by again. thank you for coming to see me.
    sarah

  2. michaelmon 18 Sep 2008 at 8:03 pm 2

    “rainbows exhale”

    Damn.
    Wish I’d thought of that.
    Nice. Very nice . . .
    ~m

    michael,
    so lovely to see you here. i kind of liked that image myself. thank you. :)
    sarah

  3. Dion 19 Sep 2008 at 12:06 am 3

    Yes I thought that that was very nice to.

    I love fluttering wings, sharing breath, whispered and bitten.

    Lovely, thank-you sarah
    Love
    Di

    hi di,
    i’m glad you liked it - i fancied the imagery myself a bit. thank you dear.
    love
    sarah

  4. Dean J. Bakeron 19 Sep 2008 at 1:58 pm 4

    lovely, and well said

    thank you, and thanks for coming by.
    sarah

  5. Tomon 19 Sep 2008 at 7:50 pm 5

    I love your new site. And your opening pieces are sublime. Sarah, I’m a great fan of yours.

    hi tom,
    thanks for coming by. it’s good to see you again. i too am a fan, and sorry i have been so absent lately. hopefully i can change that. thanks for reading, as always.
    sarah

  6. brainteaseron 19 Sep 2008 at 10:46 pm 6

    Powerful imagery, Sarah. Good stuff, as always.

    Like Tom, I’m a fan of yours, too.

    (PS: I am finally able to post my response to your comment on my Responsible blogging piece. It took me a while; I wanted to ponder hard on the point you raised, because it was a good point indeed. Feel free to disagree, my friend. It’s just what’s in my mind; I welcome differing views on the matter. Here’s the link: Responsible Blogging and Us.

    And thank you for the kind words you left on my latest poem.

    Take care.

    ~Sherma

    thank you, sherma. nice to know i have fans. I will look at your post soon. thanks for giving me the link.

    sarah

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