Sep 26 2008

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sarah flanigan

Secret Admirer

Posted at 12:01 am under Love, Poetry, joy, mystery/suspense

The doorbell rings
and I find
scattered
rose
petals
scribbled with words.

copyright 2008

7 responses so far

7 Responses to “Secret Admirer”

  1. ozymandiazon 26 Sep 2008 at 8:55 am 1

    Ooooooh

    quite… ;)
    sarah

  2. brainteaseron 26 Sep 2008 at 10:34 pm 2

    Ooh. Sweet!

    yes, indeed. ;)
    sarah

  3. Cynthiaon 28 Sep 2008 at 6:40 am 3

    LUVLUVLUV! Oh how I wish this would happen
    to me on morning or evening.

    yes, we girls surely do like it, don’t we?
    sarah

  4. Redon 28 Sep 2008 at 8:55 pm 4

    How romantical !

    great word, red, i may have to ‘borrow’ it. ;)
    sarah

  5. Dion 28 Sep 2008 at 10:36 pm 5

    awww!! So simply put. awww ! Don’t simple words mean so much.

    Thankyou sarah for your simply put words.
    Love
    Di

    thank you, dear di, but sometimes i wonder if the words are just a little too simple?
    sarah

  6. Dion 28 Sep 2008 at 10:40 pm 6

    Hi again sarah,

    This poem is just twelve easy words. How wonderful is that.No way could I write something so beautifuly romantical with just twelve easy simple words.

    aww!! I love the word romantical what red used.I’ve never heard that word before.Thank -you red.

    Love again
    Di

    hi di, again - always again. :) i feel so appreciated when you read here. thank you, dear.

    love
    sarah

  7. michaelmon 06 Oct 2008 at 6:39 pm 7

    I’m thinking the prose ain’t that great.
    Reminds me of Dove “Promises”.
    Remember Pamela’s post (Pamela’s Promises?)
    First thing I thought of.
    ~m

    hi michael,
    i remember dove promises yes, but i’m a little lost on your comment… something is flying right over my head…
    sarah

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