Oct 02 2008
if freedom..
if freedom were a wing that i could climb upon
a feathered fearless sanctuary that could
carry my soul forward
lean my eyes toward dawn
I would fly as one sparkle
across a slated sky
I would float as I was meant to
I would see
copyright 2008
7 responses so far
haunting
thank you, ozy -
sarah
Magical and awwwwwww!!
Love this. Its all fairy.
Love
Di and YOU.
thanks dear - now what about your poem? i didn’t see it at your place.
love
sarah
The pic totally fits the verse. Excellent.
hello darlin’,
isn’t that an amazing picture? i’m always so happy when i find a great one.
sarah
I am totally smitten. Not a word went astray. Exquisitely penned,:-).
hello dm,
smitten? thank you so very much. i’m flattered.
sarah
Well me dearie,
I did write a poem actually just a few hours ago but its under the latest recovery post.Argh !! I know - Yup ! recovery again. I did mantion faerie in it tho.
Its a bit dark but lovely to.
I love you little journeys sarah, I’m so happy you share them with us in your beautifuly, dreamly simply put words. Thank you so much for the inspiration to address some of my words differently. Your wonderful.
Love
Di
hi di,
well i guess i’m just going to have to go find that poem then. i’m really impressed with your poetry - it’s good. i think you don’t realize it though. thank you, dear, you’re wonderful too.
love
sarah
Oh, this poem is blissful, and true Sarah.
hello cynthia,
thank you so much - i love the idea of floating free, don’t you?
sarah
I get goosebumps when I read this, really, and with the image, dazzling. I wish you all the best, always, my friend, always.
hi tom,
you have always been such a supportive and and kind colleague - i appreciate that so much about you. thank you. i too, wish you only the best things in life.
sarah