Oct 09 2008
Pieces of you
Old trees and mountains
wise and timeless
Pick up trucks and road trips
of dusty meanderings
The magic light that
paints the image
Evening rains that sing
me to sleep
Morning sun that lifts
me from dreams
Railroad tracks and roadmaps
treasures that hide in the woods,
waiting
The sky from your eyes
the quiet you give
the breeze that knows
your name
copyright 2008
6 responses so far
Niiiice, Sarah. Nice.
I love this feeling:
Evening rains that sing
me to sleep
Morning sun that lifts
me from dreams
red darling,
so nice to see you here. i love those feelings too.
sarah
Pick up trucks and road trips
of dusty meanderings.
This is a lovely poem sarah.This writing smells pretty dusky to me. Yes it has a dusky smell to it.
Thank you for the fragrence
Love
Di
hi darling di,
yes it is a wonderful fragrance, isn’t it?
love
sarah
A lulling, sensual ode to Nature. Enjoyed.
hello cynthia,
yes, nature is a lovely thing - isn’t it. as well as what comes naturally to us.
sarah
This touched my heart in a good way
hello kaylee,
mine too, dear, mine too.
sarah
One of the things I love most about poetry is the moment. It’s one moment. Just one, where a poet feels something, hears something, sees something, learns something either about life in general or themselves. You’ve captured your moment so well. Described it eloquently. Beautiful. “the breeze that knows your name”. Fabulous.
Kim
hello my friend,
i was just thinking of you - nice that you heard me.
wow kim, your comment is like a little poem in itself. in fact, i think it’s inspiring a poem right now. thank you for always saying the best things.
love
sarah
I agree with all comments; these words just make you feel intrinsically good.
Evening rains that sing
me to sleep
It doesn’t get any better than that . . .
(called you Sas in my last comment. the nickname for my oldest daughter, Sorry)
Thanks, Sarah
~m
hi michael,
no, i guess it doesn’t get any better than that, does it.
i don’t mind for a moment that you called sas - it was sweet actually because i know where it came from. thank you.
sarah