Oct 13 2008
My Moment…
You are my moment
my bright tomorrow
my butterfly sky
that shimmers with fluttering wings
trembles with color
and vibrating breath
You are my hour
my peaceful repose
my sing-along breeze
that composes the wind
dances the trees
and coaxes the
leaves toward Autumn’s ballet
You are my day
my promise of now and
ever-more
My sun-drenched dreams
that nurture my heart and
rests my mind on afternoon’s shoulder
You are my time
my long ago, my now, my will be
the true in the truth
the big in the small
the wave in the swirl
that carries me softly to
moonlight’s embrace
copyright 2008
9 responses so far
You are my day
my promise of now and
ever-more
I should have had you write something for my wife.
So many really wonderful ‘literary’ things happening in this piece that I don’t know where to begin.
Happiness is such a lovely song to listen to.
Oh, Sas . . .
~m
hi michael,
sarah
i’m sure your wife is delighted with your own special prose. yes, happiness is a wonderful song. thank you for the ever so lovely comment.
Sarah, this piece is simply lovely.
hi wayne,
thank you - it makes me feel lovely too.
sarah
Wow Sarah, very romantic!
You’re such a fantastic poet. I can’t pick a line as a favorite, the whole poem is mesmerizing.:-)
hello dm,
thank you for your kind words - sometimes all of life is a romance.
sarah
awww!! I love this.
What a lovely embrace.
You are my time
my long ago, my now, my will be
the true in the truth
the big in the small
the wave in the swirl
that carries me softly to
moonlight’s embrace.
So beautiful.
Love Di.
Aww!! In my last post I said it would be so lovely to feel an embrace even for just a minisal of a moment,aww!!
Got such a beautiful one. aww!!
so many awww’s!!!
di,
you make me smile. thank you that, always.
love
sarah
Thank -you sarah. I love your ways and beauty with words.
x
thank you di, for loving what i do.
love
sarah
That was breathtaking!
beautifully written and wonderfully expressed…
well done
and congratulations on your new website!
why hello ds,
lovely to see you here and welcome back from your trip. thank you.
sarah
Wonderful writing Sarah
thank you so much, gem. good to see you here.
sarah
Hi Sarah!
Wow! These are the very things I want to tell my Sweetie!
I feel as though you wrote the poem for me.
Thank you!
hi sherma,
that’s very sweet that you feel that way. thank you.
sarah
*sigh* You are my time.
love it, brilliant.
hello red,
always so happy to see you here. yes, my time - i loved the idea of that, don’t you?
sarah