Oct 31 2009

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sarah flanigan

Perfection

Posted at 7:01 pm under Life, ghosts, my heart

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Perfection does not live
here
But I do
Mistakes are not
strangers
but constant companions
Words trip and fluster
at furious speed
Flaws
too many to name
Stammers and stutters
make their own tunes
Regrets wait in the wings
and anxiously.
The past simmers in a pot
on the stove
its aroma taunts and
begs me
to taste

copyright 2009

3 responses so far

3 Responses to “Perfection”

  1. courtingdisasteron 01 Nov 2009 at 4:07 pm 1

    I love the image you posted with this…very well suited. Out of all the gray and melancholy, the flower still blooms in brilliant red…

    “The past simmers in a pot
    on the stove
    its aroma taunts and
    begs me
    to taste”

    I especially love this part because of how much inspiration I draw from the past in my own writing. You have phrased it very well..

    hello cd,
    thank you for coming back to read. yes, without the past sometimes our inspiration pantries are woefully lacking. :)
    sarah

  2. Sharieon 04 Nov 2009 at 10:02 am 2

    Beautiful! And true for us all. Peace and Love, Sharie

    thank you kind lady of the ever so gentle spirit.
    love
    sarah

  3. Vicon 19 Nov 2009 at 5:24 pm 3

    I eat that stew at lunch and have the left overs for dinner. Good read. Very clever little piece.

    hello vic,
    thanks for dropping by. it’s nice to know i’m not the only lover of leftovers. ;) clever comment - i really liked it.
    sarah

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